Humor stärken

[Sinuhe]

Kann mal jemand, der Englisch kann, kurz über meinen Text schauen und ihn auf grammatische Fehler überprüfen? Ich hab den Text größtenteils mit einem Übersetzungsprogramm übersetzen lassen und nur ein wenig ausgebesser, aber vielleicht finden sich noch ein paar Fehler...

Arbeite gerade an einem Video und die Zielgruppe stellen Amerikaner dar.

Danke im voraus

Der Text:

How you can strengthen your funny bone:

1.) Observate for an uncertain period about which you amuse yourselves and other people and write down daily your observations. Pay attention to the words, the tone, the facial play and the gestures.
But why? If you carry out it strictly, the focus of your attention will change by which you can recognise unconsciously and use sensefull the potential of amusing situations.

2.) Collecte witty sayings, phrases, rhymes, jokes or life profundities in a notebook or on the computer.

Examples:
But why? You have to appropriate a good Repertoir to can reply something amusing in a lot of situations.

3.) Move you into a relaxed state and fancy the past situations from childhood, youth and adult's age in which you have laughed or have reacted laxly, playfully or humorously.

But why? If we have to master a task, our brain can decide whether it uses primarily the left one or the right hemisphere. The left one is responsible for the logical planning and the right rather for creativity and spontaneity. The mental processes which run off during creative actions distinguish themselves by the fact that they access wide commemorative structures at the same time what allows very quick solutions of the problem.

Result: You must learn to switch over to the right hemisphere to be able to amusing spontaneously. If you go to ruin too much in the logical planning, you block important humorous qualities.

[Shadaik]

Du hast ein ganz großes Problem, nämlich einen besonders hintertückischen False Friend: In diesem Kontext wird "humor" im Englischen als "Laune" übersetzt (to be in good humor - gute Laune haben oder auch ein netter Kerl sein).

Passender wäre evtl. "funny bone" (etwa lustige Ader, wörtlich lustiger Knochen), das würde auch gut mit "strengthen" zusammengehen.
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[Sinuhe]

danke!

da scheinbar niemand mehr was am text auszusetzen hat, übernimm ich ihn mal so

[Wraith]

Der Text:

How to strengthen your funny bone:

1.) Observe for an undetermined time about what amuses you and other people and write down your observations on a daily basis. Pay attention to the words, the tone, the facial play and the gestures.
But why? If you carry it out strictly, the focus of your attention will shift from what you can recognise unconsciously to what you can use consciousnesly for potentially amusing situations.

2.)Collecte witty sayings, phrases, rhymes, jokes or life profundities in a notebook or on a computer.

Examples:
But why? You will have to a nice repertoir of amusing replies for a lot of situations.

3.) Tra to set yourself in a relaxed state and fancy past situations from childhood, youth and adult's age in which you have laughed at or have reacted to in a laxly, playfully or humorously way.

But why? If we have to master a task, our brain can decide whether it uses primarily the left one or the right hemisphere. The left one is responsible for the logical planning and the right rather for creativity and spontaneity. The mental processes which run during creative actions distinguish themselves by their access to wide commemorative structures which at the same what allows very quick problem solving.

Summary: You must learn to switch from your right hemisphere to being able to be amusing spontaneously. If start by planning logically, you block important humorous qualities.



Meine verbesserte Version ist weit davon entfernt perfekt zu sein. Das liegt zum einen daran dass ich betrunken bin und zum anderen, dass ich besser arbeite wenn ich den Originaltext vorliegen habe.

Als Native Speaker wäre ich gerne bereit jeden kürzeren Text für das FGH und dessen User zu übersetzen, sofern ich genügend Vorwarnzeit erhalte. Ich übernehme allerdings keine Garantien.
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[Kramer]

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"sense of humour" vs. "funny bone"
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[Nowhere]

@ Sinuhe....

How to improve your funny bone....

1. Observe, for any length of time, what you and others find amusing, and keep a record of your observations. Pay close attention to word, tone, facial expressions and gestures.

But why? If you follow these guidelines strictly, the focus of your attention will change, to the point where, subconsciously, you will be able to make full sense of humourous occasions.

2. Collect witty sayings, idioms, jokes and and profundities of life in a note book, or on your computer.

Examples:

But why? You will need to build up a substantial repertory, enabling you to respond appropriately to many a humourous situation.

3. Relax and imagine scenes from the past - your childhood, youth and adulthood, in which you laughed and felt at ease, playful and humoured.

But why? When mastering a task, our brain will decide whether to predominantly utilise the left or right hemisphere – the left being responsible for logical planning, the right for creativity and structures defined by our memories*, whilst at the same time allowing quick solutions to problems.

Result: You must learn to switch from the right to the left hemisphere in order to be humoured spontaneously. If you focus too much on logical planning, you will block such humerous qualities.

* commemorative... (= gedenken)...??

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Und jetzt meine Frage: But why???
Why put so much effort into PLANNING humour?
Just go with the flow....

[Nowhere]

@ Wraith

///Als Native Speaker....////

Wo bist'n du zur Schule gegangen?!

Aber du sagtest ja, dass du schon 'leicht' besoffen warst. Wohl eher schon halb 'unconscious'...

[Sinuhe]

wow, erst jetzt seh ich wie schlecht mein Text war

Großes Danke!

edit:
commemorative: Erinnerungs...

Noch eine ganz kleine Frage ^^'

Stimmt der Satz: "Learn to get you in a exhilarating feeling (for example trhough imagination)?

[Nowhere]

[Sinuhe]

Stimmt das eigentlich so?

--> Be active! It's simple to watch funny videos and hear comedy, but to do it by yourself, you have to train a little...nobody is burn as a comedian!

[Kival]

[boomklever]

[boomklever]

[Sinuhe]

Danke !!!

Ich müsste echt mal mein Englisch aufbessern. In der Schule hab ich dieses Jahr komischerweise so gut wie nichts gelernt

[Nowhere]

Hi Sinhuhe,

wenn es noch nicht zu spät für Vorschläge ist....

Take active steps! Watching funny videos and listening to comedy is easy enough, but in order to do it yourself you will need some practice….nobody is born a comedian.

[Sinuhe]

[Peter H.]

o yeah, old england is the jumping.board for humour.